As you can see, I have now listed the other writer as Tyson K. Lane!
Once this whole project took a huge step forward, he no longer wanted to lurk in the shadows like some puppet master.
And by a huge step forward, I mean that the peoples of the world have more structure, world is more fully realized (there’s even a map of sorts) and there’s more detail in how the locations function.
Beyond that, the main character has more of a back story as well as a direction forward. And in the words of Mr. Lane himself, “She is finally talking to me and I think I like her…”
To top that off, we even have a few first draft chapters in the pile now.
Huge. Step. Forward.
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